WIP trial. Any feedback?

It would be really great to have someone play this before I publish it. It is a decently hard 1 minute ish trial. Please be brutaly honest.

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it's a pretty decent trial for a beginner
my advice would be to never use the curvel tool as it makes things inconsistent and slippery
it'd probably be best to make the distance between these lines here bigger so that it's not annoying to fit through

lastly you should try to incorporate a greater variety of obstacles instead of relying on hooking on these lines and short tubes

 

for a relatively unknown and new creator this trial is amazing considering how difficult it is (for me) and for it to be compressed in that little area. makes me think of reborn's unforgiving series with a dash of dblu's air force one
the very beginning is a little inconsistent, i tried to get on but i dont fully get on, making the first star a little difficult. the curves are making the gameplay feel incohesive bc it kind of jerks around pete a lot. dont be dependent on those and put in a blend of subtle obstacles and things like that other than riding those curves. however, really good overall, there is already a clear skill gap between you and most beginners, including me (ive been playing for almost 4 years)

e; i take back what i said since i just noticed that youve been on forums longer than i have