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    Discussion in 'Tracks' started by Coffee, Dec 15, 2013.

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    1. Foundations

      Foundations Well-Known Member Elite Author Official Author

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      It's fine to get inspiration - that's where all tracks started. Your problem seems to be the fact that you're probably looking at other tracks whilst you're making your own which gets you in the mindset that the way a certain person has done it, is the only way to do it. Start by drawing out a rough version of how you want the track to look on paper before you touch your mouse and you'll probs find it easy to make things flow. Having not played any of your tracks (don't take it personally I don't play any), find or develop your style by just drawing sh*t and people will (maybe) stop calling you out for copying.

      One of my fav quotes about idea generation goes along the lines of "The person who created the computer didn't start on the computer".
       
      Foundations, Feb 9, 2019
      #6421
      Volund, demimondance, Netsik and 6 others like this.
    2. Figured

      Figured (9/10) Elite Author Official Author

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      ok thanks dude
       
      Figured, Feb 9, 2019
      #6422
    3. OdysseusSupreme

      OdysseusSupreme Certified Slowpoke Elite Author Team Balloon Official Author

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      i need to finish my track tie everything together and finish detail
       
      OdysseusSupreme, Feb 9, 2019
      #6423
    4. Logeton

      Logeton Guest

      k
       
      Logeton, Feb 9, 2019
      #6424
    5. mR..A

      mR..A i didn't break the habit Ghosting Legend VIP Team Balloon Official Author

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      jungle sketch

      [​IMG]
       
      mR..A, Feb 10, 2019
      #6425
      Logeton, Volund, Zgolex and 14 others like this.
    6. Netsik

      Netsik Why am I here VIP Official Author

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      I need help- what can I do to make this moose look better?
      the track is coming out before March, hopefully.
      Screen Shot 2019-02-10 at 3.53.54 PM.png

      v.2
      Screen Shot 2019-02-10 at 7.25.01 PM.png

      v.3
      Screen Shot 2019-02-10 at 9.25.02 PM.png
       
      Last edited: Feb 11, 2019
      Netsik, Feb 10, 2019
      #6426
      Zgolex, Ishu, OdysseusSupreme and 2 others like this.
    7. Ishu

      Ishu Well-Known Member Elite Author Official Author

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      get rid of those circles, it looks like rock detail, especially with the central highlights
      and as a general rule, detailing animal fur is easier when you draw bigger

      on a diff note tho, collab with xwinx hit 4mb
      upload_2019-2-10_15-34-5.png
       
      Ishu, Feb 10, 2019
      #6427
      Logeton, Volund, Zgolex and 12 others like this.
    8. Max007x

      Max007x Forum Moderator Staff Member Administrator Forum Moderator VIP Official Author

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      Honestly besides the way you filled it, which could be better, you mostly just messed up the shaping of the head and neck area. Also the face looks 2d looking to the left while the antlers look as if it was kinda looking at the camera. Just redo the face. Use a nice reference, preferably a 2d one
       
      Max007x, Feb 10, 2019
      #6428
    9. Rayb25

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      tips? 69DBC689-50A4-4778-B6BA-7704C1DBC4B2.png
       
      Rayb25, Feb 10, 2019
      #6429
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    10. Nexus

      Nexus Well-Known Member Official Author

      Nexus, Feb 11, 2019
      #6430
      Logeton, Rayb25, TuttiFruity and 2 others like this.
    11. Figured

      Figured (9/10) Elite Author Official Author

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      have geeze
       

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      Figured, Feb 11, 2019
      #6431
      mudkip, Nexus and Max007x like this.
    12. Elibloodthirst

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      Stop focusing on shading and clean up on the bare minimum. Make sure the shaping is fine and do the basic features i.e. the eye, antler and hooves.
      Plus scale the thing up dude
       
      Elibloodthirst, Feb 11, 2019
      #6432
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    13. Deleted member 6703

      Deleted member 6703 Guest

      partoiftrack.JPG Don't need any tips, just doing this track for fun :)
       
      Deleted member 6703, Feb 11, 2019
      #6433
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    14. Figured

      Figured (9/10) Elite Author Official Author

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      what do you think of this? Screen Shot 2019-02-11 at 7.37.25 pm.png
       
      Figured, Feb 11, 2019
      #6434
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    15. og_Cork

      og_Cork Well-Known Member Official Author

      Screenshot 2019-02-11 at 7.41.13 PM.png
      New wip, this is the beginning
       
      og_Cork, Feb 12, 2019
      #6435
      OdysseusSupreme, Elibloodthirst, cctvcctvcctv and 1 other person like this.
    16. Figured

      Figured (9/10) Elite Author Official Author

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      Figured, Feb 12, 2019
      #6436
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    17. Rayb25

      Rayb25 Certified Freak Elite Author Team Balloon Official Author

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      AD0952F5-B2B2-46C7-BE66-A14A12A88EF8.png water jumps III
       
      Rayb25, Feb 12, 2019
      #6437
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    18. tetrationiscool

      tetrationiscool Forum Legend Ghosting Legend Official Author

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      It looks cool, but I found it a bit hard to read at first glance. "Keverything but the Kitchen ISink", "everything but the Kitchen IS ink", "Keverything but the itchen Sink", ...
      It's not difficult to decipher, but you might want to consider changing it a bit. I'm looking forward to it.

      Anyway, I don't want to spam threads with unrelated content, so here's my next "tetration's challenge" track. I made it a really long time ago and haven't gotten around to posting it. See if you can figure out how one might complete this.
      upload_2019-2-11_20-42-46.png
       
      tetrationiscool, Feb 12, 2019
      #6438
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    19. Figured

      Figured (9/10) Elite Author Official Author

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      holy damn
       
      Figured, Feb 12, 2019
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    20. Deleted member 6703

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      it’s easy. all you have to do is follow the lines i drew. 7A368153-6F62-4BC4-8131-B5B46C3A5F53.jpeg surprised it took you so long to design something so simple. +1
       
      Deleted member 6703, Feb 12, 2019
      #6440
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