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Discussion in 'Tracks' started by Coffee, Dec 15, 2013.

  1. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    I decided I didn't like the detail that was going on, so I decided to scratch that and start in a different direction. I know that it was a quick WIP that was abandoned, but I could see it wasn't going well. I like this one a lot better. What do you think @Elibloodthirst
    Screen Shot 2014-10-06 at 5.18.56 PM.png
     
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  2. Elibloodthirst

    Elibloodthirst DeadRising2 VIP Team Helicopter Forum Member Of The Decade (2014-2024) Official Author

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    Mouse, brush then line. I'm investing into a bamboo pen.
     
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  3. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Do you think the detail is good, or just meh.
     
  4. Elibloodthirst

    Elibloodthirst DeadRising2 VIP Team Helicopter Forum Member Of The Decade (2014-2024) Official Author

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    Left side is good, very right isn't at all.
     
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  5. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    The very end right? I thought that looked bad. I was trying to make a cliff, but had no idea how.
     
  6. Elibloodthirst

    Elibloodthirst DeadRising2 VIP Team Helicopter Forum Member Of The Decade (2014-2024) Official Author

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    Yeah, the cliff sucks.
     
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  7. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    How should I make it better?
     
  8. LukeSpecogna

    LukeSpecogna Well-Known Member Official Author

  9. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Do they look better now?
    Screen Shot 2014-10-06 at 8.35.36 PM.png
     
  10. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    I changed it up a bit. Screen Shot 2014-10-06 at 9.22.11 PM.png
     
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  11. crane

    crane Well-Known Member Official Author

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    If you don't mind me giving input - the cliffs match the start great, but the bit I circled above throws off the perspective and looks out of place
     
  12. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Thanks!
     
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  13. Maple

    Maple Love to draw VIP Team Balloon Trackmaker Of The Decade Official Author

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  14. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    But I am terrible at deatailing
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  15. Maple

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    U don't have to be good/worthy at detailing to ask for help there :)
     
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  16. weem

    weem FREE RIDER LEGEND Elite Author Team Blob Official Author

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    Looks familiar to someone else's detail, couldn't really point out who it's familiar to right now but it's relatable to someone. (not trying to say that a bad thing, I mean references just help you find your own style as long as you're not completely ripping theirs)

    As for your boy WheelieMaker, he got some tracks in the works. Don't know when my next track will be out, sometime next week maybe.
     
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  17. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    I'm trying to come up with my own style, but it's just hard for me. Trying this detail is the first time I have tried to draw good.
     
  18. crane

    crane Well-Known Member Official Author

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    Just started detailing my first track in ages - very rusty so I'm going to make it short
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  19. Joelbmx

    Joelbmx Well-Known Member Official Author

    I like.
     
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  20. Joelbmx

    Joelbmx Well-Known Member Official Author

    It's for posting WIP tracks and giving constructive criticism, and that is what's going on.
     
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