Poem or rap, Cause I have something to scrap , I make tracks all day but I don't care, When I work on tracks that don't save I want to rip out my hair, Not to mention everytime I ghost, I always have to see who ghosts the most, Close to breaking my i pad, But it's so worth it when I beat someone I'm so glad. Wtf was that this is idk but it sucks badly pssst I need a lesson plz
sorry son i cannot give you lesson but dont worry sport you still have my blessin please do not rip out you hair unless youre ric flair and have good healthcare plz take a seat in the chair
Ok then I'm glad to have your blessing, But it's my tracks is where I'm stressin, Working for hours making something cool Then my sister comes and wrecks my track and o yeah she's a fool However I'm no good in rhyming or rapping, But when I experience you I start clappin.
A villager, The day is bright already, the air dry and the wind steady Chores to do but his back is heavy, No crops and no food, his lungs aint airy But he still pushes on, cause its all he got, The gods, they test him, he sweats, its hot I dont want to write this poem anymore What om trying to say - ehm - with this lore (i guess that makes sense) Is that youre the villager and the devs are the gods And you should wake up because the game sucks and theyre doing nothing (blabety blaa -- bods!) Seriously the community is ******* amazing - at times (at least it used to be when i was as young as the majority) But the game sucks, making tracks is way too hard (blabla -- bority) Well i guess its subjective but thats at leaat what i think And please for the love of god (not the devs anymore that is in question), do not buy any ******* stupid ass freerider coins, badaboom bink! Well now that I think of it maybe Im overreacting but Im gonna post this anyway no way ive gone through this hell of typing with my cell phone for nothing. Peace! ( ---Beace!)
It's a really deep poem but I just made that then... in like 10 mins there are some nights that you just want to fall asleep and forget about everything, but you're stuck awake until light, getting no sleep 'till the next night, you're stuck alone in an cold, empty room with nothing but voices in your head, the pain in your head gets bigger, but goes unnoticed, you're trapped in a world which is inevitable in your eyes, although you don't realise that the way out of this mess, is to just let people in, although it's never that simple, and you've tried to let people in many times, but you just keep getting knocked down, getting knocked down so much that you're stuck, you don't know what to do anymore, you don't know, you don't, you. I just wrote from the heart tbh... (no this isn't happening to me) I guess that's the best way to do it
It is good, it has a rhythm to it and it really shows emotion, transfers your feelings, but the end is almost unnecessarily... poetic? like kind of pretentious sounding almost - don't get me wrong I like it but it feels to have no other purpose to sound cool. So yeah that's my opinion. E: it was much better than mine
This thread is great There isnt no hate I love rhymes And good memes I have no time To write wtf rhymes with memes
many things do, like theme dream scheme me he we seem see tree redeem etc. i know some didn't end with M sos tfu the next word can start with M if its so important.
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