Free Rider HD Open Campaign Contest!

Char If I reduce the amount of lines under the track and make it less messy, would I have a better chance in making the campaign? Here is the track if you forgot.
http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53192-les-montagnes

 

Don't worry about it JacobCahoon , its a good track. My only comment would be the use of gravity on these first couple campaigns might be confusing for new users, but thats not a deal breaker and I wouldn't worry too much about changing that. GJ!

 

So would this be for campaign 2 or 3? Char

 

With detail not considered, the first half of the track itself is very good. The second half kind of gets rough and sloppy, but you seem to be a pretty good track maker overall.
The detail isn't very good though, but considering the style, you might do well to try something more similar to this track.

 

http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53210-morning-walk

 

Here is my revised track
http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53193-fun-and-fast-1-1
new vs.old

removing some lines
some detail, and boosts

 

the track im currently making, here is a pic:
I'm done the layout, im working on detail. any recommendations on the background or extra detail?

 

LEAVE IT LIKE IT IS! ADD A BUNCH OF BLACK LINES THAT GO FROM THE SKY TO UNDER GROUND! MAKE IT IMPOSSIBLE! SO THAT IT DOESNT PLACE!

JK no not really. some detail under it would be nice... and maybe a few clouds

 

what do you mean by under? I put line detail in and I dont think I should add clouds because its supposed to be desert themed, and im going to put sand dunes in the background. anything i should change?

 

Working on this on and off for the last couple of days. Just some exprimental light black detail.

http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53240-royalty

 

Great Track , love the detail

 

All the sloppy Eli c:.

 

Hail the sloppy eli*

 

http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53244-road-to-the-star-i

 

Good job dude! Hope it gets in

 

here is a dumb question. Where do you actually submit your track? Sry guys I'm totally new to this.

 

Bold underlined italics means SARCASIM

 

Do you think this obstacle would be too difficult for the intermediate campaign?

The detail isn't finished, but the gameplay is. Is it too complex?

 

PM me the code. Ill tell you (No I wont steal it)