Free Rider HD Open Campaign Contest!

Here is my entry, I hope you like it. I just uploaded a minute ago.

http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53132-rolling-hills

 

I like it. Also got the new best time of 14.70!

 

here , play mine tell me what you think
http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/52949-platforms-and-islands
http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53091-fast-and-fun

 

I really liked both of them. I wouldn't be surprised if any of them got into the campaign

 

wow thanks. I'm exited now . I've been getting lots of good feed back from people, thanks for you help!!!!!!!!!

 

Heres my second entry: Please comment as i LOVEEEEEEEEE CRITICISM!!!!
http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53145-island-terror

 

I like the way it looks, a little busy, and a bit hard. I think (my opinion) that you should post it when the campaign gets harder, or is looking for harder tracks. nice though

 

well, I have made another track, I hope you like it. give me feedback http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53149-down-the-mountain

 

dude that was fun. Not too hard And a good length{time}!

 

hey guys! here is my second entry http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53157-pleasant-ride . it didn't upload to the newest tracks straight away so i tryed to upload it again but it turned out that my computer bugged or something and it actually was uploaded the first time. please delete the one later uploaded if possible

 

I would say that the detail might be a tad lacking, but the track is so smooth that I hope this makes it in.

 

Cheers, any more criticism??

 

Velksy Char Eric I put a bit in the end of my track im sure you will like

 

I really hope you love it, 'cause here goes.
"Always go fast" is bad advice, the opposite needs to be taught. The track isn't very smooth, though effort is shown which is good. It's also pretty sloppy, especially with power up placement. (Plus there are too many power ups.) The "loop" seems rushed, there's a section of it's track where the lines are visibly separated.
If you put more time into a track, I think you can do pretty good. This one's alright, but not campaign worthy in my opinion.
Hope this helps.

 

Help used

 

This should be in . The flow, the smoothness, it's all really nice. Great job .

 

I liked you track: very smooth. I completed it the first try with out wiping out so I gave you a thumbs up . Try playing this http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53091-fast-and-fun
[criticism is appreciated ]

 

hey i uploaded another track but its pretty hard for this part of the campaign so im saving it for later, I tried my best on it and if you wanna check it out its here: http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/53162-calamity-cave

 

Thanks for the feedback guys! appreciated.

 

fun but kinda difficult.