He's one of the stronger drawers we have on this game.
His track leans way into the visuals. A heavy detailer, and the piece looks fantastic w/ all that contrast. With how small the track is, being able to see everything immediately, I feel like composition does apply more here(rule of thirds w/ the girl and the tower) and it is nicely composed. The art is interesting and the mishmash of stuff works. The stuff that is being drawn definitely meets a necessary skill-ceiling required for a feat. My only critique about the detail is it's sloppy(tablet + brush combo), but his drawing ability kinda lessens the sloppiness compared to others(braw, south, early cynic, etc.).
His focus wasn't making a ride track but ride is rough, partly due to how sloppy it is. I do like the beginning parts of the ride(idea-wise).
I think the issue w/ this is it's starting to just be a drawing for insta and not really a track, even if his track was short(
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/55539-sumatran-rainforest) or bad(SSCE by south). I don't think there'd be too much of a problem b/c those examples still feel like a track. But it feels like the ride was just made to really squeeze out the most from the drawing, autogen example but you get the point:
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/247003-official-frhd-contest. Also, although it's too soon to say I kinda agree that it feels like a rinse-and-repeat process much like figured and stevenleary's tracks, but that's not a legitimate reason to not feat. especially since those two have received their feats.
Overall this is a yes. If he cleans up his detail he'll be able to draw bigger tracks(lower k count) hopefully w/o having to squeeze out every bit of drawing he has w/ the ride(reusing detail, hopefully this makes sense). Plus it'll feel more like a actual track than a drawing.
Summarized feedback:
Super heavy, looks great w/ all that contrast, love the aesthetic. Art definitely meets a necessary skill-ceiling required for a feat. It's sloppy(brush + tablet combo) however the scale and drawing ability lessens the impact of that compared to other cases, but ofc can do some fair clean up.
His focus wasn't making a ride track but ride is rough, partly due to how sloppy it is. I do like the beginning parts of the ride(idea-wise).
Overall, yes. If he cleans up his detail he'll be able to draw bigger tracks(lower k count) hopefully w/o having to squeeze out the ride w/ the drawing he has as it's leaning more to a drawing than a track.
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