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Discussion in 'Tracks' started by Ness, Feb 18, 2023.

  1. Flying_T_Rex

    Flying_T_Rex Well-Known Member Team Blob Official Author

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    Thanks for the feedback, really appreciated! Sorry for the blob :oops:

    Better things coming soon!
     
    Last edited: Jul 15, 2024
  2. Sltg28

    Sltg28 Well-Known Member Team Helicopter Official Author

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    thanks y'all! will make sure to improve and make better tracks from now on
     
    AfterImage, Cerasium, pawflix and 3 others like this.
  3. Elibloodthirst

    Elibloodthirst DeadRising2 VIP Team Helicopter Forum Member Of The Decade (2014-2024) Official Author

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    Hi guys,
    Fever dream by moi

    https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/983727-fever-dream by moinotchubb

    Final vote 5 YAY 3 NAY

    congratulations
     
    Blank_Guy, Uniior, SirHuman01 and 7 others like this.
  4. J_Rider

    J_Rider Active Member Official Author

    https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/954517-levels
    Posted this track last year after working on it for a really long time. Took ages with the detail and I think its a really good ride with a few different secret areas to explore. Is this where I apply to get it featured? Was bummed it didn't get a feature becuase I thought it would be of the standard. Lmk Plz
     
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  5. nasrani

    nasrani Forum Legend VIP Team Blob Best Trackmaker Of 2024 Official Author

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    I have no say in what gets featured but I'm going to give you feedback anyway because I love your track.

    Your drawings have so much character. They're sort of clumsy and primitive but in an endearing way. Your work reminds me of grandma Moses, whose lack of formal training didn't inhibit her paintings, but instead allowed her to create what couldn't be made by someone concerned with proper perspective and smooth line quality. I think your disregard of conventional drawing techniques makes your artwork wonderfully unique.
    The shapes of the trees are so interesting and the river is inexplicably evocative. Your drawings are bold and folk-artsy. The variety of scale is also very pleasing.

    I also can't help but love some of the little drawings interspersed among the track. I especially love the trampoline, the pictograph of the levels skatepark, the iphone pic of the bros, the picture of the two middle aged white guys on a beach, the mini pirate ship battle, the "shape" graph, and best of all, the mini comic with numbered panels.

    Reasons this track might not get featured:
    - Nearly all of the art appears to be drawn with the brush tool at its smallest line segment setting. Many think this is a rookie move because it looks hurried and sloppy. (I like the quality it gives to your drawings)
    - No clear theme. I think tracks tend to be more impactful when they have an overarching theme, story or aesthetic.
    - Esoteric "symbols" don't hit the same for those of us who have no idea what you're referring to. This is why I don't usually like song lyrics in tracks. Without the music they def don't hit the same.
    - Not a clear cohesion between the rideable parts of the track and the themes in the artwork.

    I don't think this track will get featured but for what it's worth it has become a favorite of mine!
     
  6. J_Rider

    J_Rider Active Member Official Author


    Damn that means so much, thank you for taking the time to review it so in depth. I now totally see that side of things and thinking of other featured tracks I think you're right as it is more of a big random artwork than a themed experience. Thankyou again it means the world knowing someone liked the track enough to say that. It is inspiring me to get back into it and make some more tracks in the future. Cheers
     
  7. Ness

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    SLD 3200 Subscriber Special (SoliD Fest 2024) by goofyinc
    poll results: yea 5 / nay 0
    congrats on your second feature!
     
  8. Volund

    Volund ithring VIP Official Author

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    this was discussed earlier but no one posted the CC :s

    Saigo No Mono by Egona (https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/984416-saigo-no-mono)
    Final Vote: 2 yes, 3 no - decision, no feature.

    Feedback, comments, CC:
    if this is indeed your last track, i want to reiterate that it's really really good. no matter what comes next, therell always be a spot for you in this community!
     
    Spare1, Egona, Cerasium and 9 others like this.
  9. AfterImage

    AfterImage Well-Known Member Team Balloon Official Author

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    push harder what happened
     
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  10. Ness

    Ness Guest

    LIMBO by MuchoPanda
    poll results: yea 5 / nay 0
    congrats!
     
  11. MuchoPanda

    MuchoPanda Well-Known Member Team Truck Official Author

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    <3 !!!!!
     
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  12. AfterImage

    AfterImage Well-Known Member Team Balloon Official Author

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    Good grief my ex would be jealous by how long this is
     
  13. Cerasium

    Cerasium Mod On The FRHD Speedrun.com Page Ghosting Legend Ghost Moderator Team Helicopter Best Ghoster Of 2024 Official Author

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    i read out his entire post in voice chat lol
     
  14. Elibloodthirst

    Elibloodthirst DeadRising2 VIP Team Helicopter Forum Member Of The Decade (2014-2024) Official Author

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    hi guys SKATEYARD GRAVEYARD by Nasrani and Ness

    YES 7 NAY 0

    have another one you cheeky boys
     
  15. Volund

    Volund ithring VIP Official Author

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    Kyurem's Awakening by AfterImage (Innominate)
    Final vote: 5 yes, 0 no. Decision, FEATURE. Congratulations to AfterImage, who earns their first feature! Fantastic work, hoping to see more from you in the near future.

    Feedback, comments, CC:
    very glad this was featured! deserved it at the time and deserves it now. keep it up
     
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  16. Innominate

    Innominate Well-Known Member Official Author

    babe start awakening (babe is kyurem)
     
  17. SilentFinger

    SilentFinger I have 3 featured tracks Elite Author Official Author

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  18. Innominate

    Innominate Well-Known Member Official Author

    Thank you it means a Lot
     
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  19. SirHuman01

    SirHuman01 Well-Known Member Team Blob Official Author

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  20. TPlacella

    TPlacella Super Moderator on the FRHD speedrun.com page Team Helicopter Official Author

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    I saw Tubiek’s message but it’s a combined track with some of DblU and MikeWi’s featured tracks. It is something that Eli does on Elibloodthirst as well. No feat as those tracks are already featured individually.
     
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