Drawing Thread

Im so confused

 

Oh wow I just noticed that I am an official Author. I get it now

 

*shoots himself*

 

I'm a new official, so I know I have A LOT to work on.
http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/88834-phantasmagoric
What do you guys think about this? ^ Please point out anything you think that I could do better next time/work on, or anything I did really well

 

The only thing i could say is color in your shadows a bit more and the white parts have to be white or be white with some heavier detail in them (heart)

 

I like the way you made your detail capture the essence of your track so well! Great job!

 

Aight niglets diss is da real **** what do yall think i could do better on this and the bridge isnt finish so not on that haha

 

Yeah, I would've done those things but it was for the remix contest and I THOUGHT I was running out of time (for skeeny, it was already sunday) and it was 10:30pm for me lol

 

add more grass, looks great though!

 

The bottom left could use a little work. No nose? What is this? Amateur hour?

Okay but seriously, it looks amazing.

 

Great movie.

 

Alright. Haven't messed around in the editor for a while now, but I decided to see if I can still draw. So, I decided to make some simple foliage-y stuff.
Please, rip me apart. I want to get better at foliage.

It's really messy because I through it together in 15 minutes. (That's fast for me).

 

tbh it reminds me of like an under water support of something or maybe some wreckage if you made an underwater track out of it that would be awesome

 

Ok you asked for it.... Complete **** 15 min as well, what a joke. Terrible Now that I've lowered your morale, I'd say start making your rocks' shapes more complex. Regarding your foliage they seem a lot like chains. I'm assuming they're leaves, if that is the case it should look more like this: basically having leaves sticking outwards from the stock instead of it being grouped up like grapes

 

Whatever advice he is spitting out Sono Id take it

 

Harsh.

Lol jks

 

Awesome! Thanks for the feedback.
Ya, I know my rocks look miserable and I expected my foliage to be related to chains. I haven't drawn on FRHD in forever so I didn't expect much to come from it.
I will work on it some more tomorrow (and actually take my time). I will post what I have on here.

 

Good luck!