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Discussion in 'Tracks' started by Coffee, Dec 15, 2013.

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  1. Foundations

    Foundations Well-Known Member Elite Author Official Author

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    It's fine to get inspiration - that's where all tracks started. Your problem seems to be the fact that you're probably looking at other tracks whilst you're making your own which gets you in the mindset that the way a certain person has done it, is the only way to do it. Start by drawing out a rough version of how you want the track to look on paper before you touch your mouse and you'll probs find it easy to make things flow. Having not played any of your tracks (don't take it personally I don't play any), find or develop your style by just drawing sh*t and people will (maybe) stop calling you out for copying.

    One of my fav quotes about idea generation goes along the lines of "The person who created the computer didn't start on the computer".
     
    Foundations, Feb 9, 2019
    #6421
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  2. Figured

    Figured (9/10) Elite Author Official Author

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    ok thanks dude
     
    Figured, Feb 9, 2019
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  3. OdysseusSupreme

    OdysseusSupreme Certified Slowpoke Elite Author Team Balloon Official Author

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    i need to finish my track tie everything together and finish detail
     
    OdysseusSupreme, Feb 9, 2019
    #6423
  4. Logeton

    Logeton Guest

    k
     
    Logeton, Feb 9, 2019
    #6424
  5. mR..A

    mR..A i didn't break the habit Ghosting Legend VIP Team Balloon Official Author

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    jungle sketch

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    mR..A, Feb 10, 2019
    #6425
    Logeton, Volund, Zgolex and 14 others like this.
  6. Netsik

    Netsik Why am I here VIP Official Author

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    I need help- what can I do to make this moose look better?
    the track is coming out before March, hopefully.
    Screen Shot 2019-02-10 at 3.53.54 PM.png

    v.2
    Screen Shot 2019-02-10 at 7.25.01 PM.png

    v.3
    Screen Shot 2019-02-10 at 9.25.02 PM.png
     
    Last edited: Feb 11, 2019
    Netsik, Feb 10, 2019
    #6426
    Zgolex, Ishu, OdysseusSupreme and 2 others like this.
  7. Ishu

    Ishu Well-Known Member Elite Author Official Author

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    get rid of those circles, it looks like rock detail, especially with the central highlights
    and as a general rule, detailing animal fur is easier when you draw bigger

    on a diff note tho, collab with xwinx hit 4mb
    upload_2019-2-10_15-34-5.png
     
    Ishu, Feb 10, 2019
    #6427
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  8. Max007x

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    Honestly besides the way you filled it, which could be better, you mostly just messed up the shaping of the head and neck area. Also the face looks 2d looking to the left while the antlers look as if it was kinda looking at the camera. Just redo the face. Use a nice reference, preferably a 2d one
     
    Max007x, Feb 10, 2019
    #6428
  9. Rayb25

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    tips? 69DBC689-50A4-4778-B6BA-7704C1DBC4B2.png
     
    Rayb25, Feb 10, 2019
    #6429
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  10. Nexus

    Nexus Well-Known Member Official Author

    Nexus, Feb 11, 2019
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  11. Figured

    Figured (9/10) Elite Author Official Author

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    have geeze
     

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    Figured, Feb 11, 2019
    #6431
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  12. Elibloodthirst

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    Stop focusing on shading and clean up on the bare minimum. Make sure the shaping is fine and do the basic features i.e. the eye, antler and hooves.
    Plus scale the thing up dude
     
    Elibloodthirst, Feb 11, 2019
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  13. Deleted member 6703

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    partoiftrack.JPG Don't need any tips, just doing this track for fun :)
     
    Deleted member 6703, Feb 11, 2019
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  14. Figured

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    what do you think of this? Screen Shot 2019-02-11 at 7.37.25 pm.png
     
    Figured, Feb 11, 2019
    #6434
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  15. og_Cork

    og_Cork Well-Known Member Official Author

    Screenshot 2019-02-11 at 7.41.13 PM.png
    New wip, this is the beginning
     
    og_Cork, Feb 12, 2019
    #6435
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  16. Figured

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    Figured, Feb 12, 2019
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  17. Rayb25

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    AD0952F5-B2B2-46C7-BE66-A14A12A88EF8.png water jumps III
     
    Rayb25, Feb 12, 2019
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  18. tetrationiscool

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    It looks cool, but I found it a bit hard to read at first glance. "Keverything but the Kitchen ISink", "everything but the Kitchen IS ink", "Keverything but the itchen Sink", ...
    It's not difficult to decipher, but you might want to consider changing it a bit. I'm looking forward to it.

    Anyway, I don't want to spam threads with unrelated content, so here's my next "tetration's challenge" track. I made it a really long time ago and haven't gotten around to posting it. See if you can figure out how one might complete this.
    upload_2019-2-11_20-42-46.png
     
    tetrationiscool, Feb 12, 2019
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  19. Figured

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    holy damn
     
    Figured, Feb 12, 2019
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  20. Deleted member 6703

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    it’s easy. all you have to do is follow the lines i drew. 7A368153-6F62-4BC4-8131-B5B46C3A5F53.jpeg surprised it took you so long to design something so simple. +1
     
    Deleted member 6703, Feb 12, 2019
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