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FRHD poetry

Discussion in 'Anything and Everything not Free Rider' started by Skeeny, Dec 23, 2015.

  1. Todredrob

    Todredrob Well-Known Member Team Helicopter Official Author

    Poem or rap,
    Cause I have something to scrap ,
    I make tracks all day but I don't care,
    When I work on tracks that don't save I want to rip out my hair,
    Not to mention everytime I ghost,
    I always have to see who ghosts the most,
    Close to breaking my i pad,
    But it's so worth it when I beat someone I'm so glad.

    Wtf was that this is idk but it sucks badly pssst I need a lesson plz
     
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  2. pssst

    pssst Forum Legend Elite Author Team Blob Official Author

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    sorry son i cannot give you lesson
    but dont worry sport you still have my blessin
    please do not rip out you hair unless youre ric flair and have good healthcare
    plz take a seat in the chair
     
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  3. CityShep

    CityShep Gay Furry Memoriam VIP Official Author

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    Im beginning to feel like a fap god, fap god
    They said I fap like a robot, so call me fap-bot
     
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  4. Todredrob

    Todredrob Well-Known Member Team Helicopter Official Author

    Ok then I'm glad to have your blessing,
    But it's my tracks is where I'm stressin,
    Working for hours making something cool
    Then my sister comes and wrecks my track and o yeah she's a fool
    However I'm no good in rhyming or rapping,
    But when I experience you I start clappin.
     
  5. Cynic

    Cynic uh oh Elite Author Official Author

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    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    cityshep is gay
    so are you
     
  6. CityShep

    CityShep Gay Furry Memoriam VIP Official Author

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    I feel violated
     
  7. elephant_breeder

    elephant_breeder Active Member Official Author

    A villager,

    The day is bright already, the air dry and the wind steady
    Chores to do but his back is heavy,
    No crops and no food, his lungs aint airy

    But he still pushes on, cause its all he got,
    The gods, they test him, he sweats, its hot
    I dont want to write this poem anymore
    What om trying to say - ehm - with this lore (i guess that makes sense)
    Is that youre the villager and the devs are the gods
    And you should wake up because the game sucks and theyre doing nothing (blabety blaa -- bods!)
    Seriously the community is ******* amazing - at times (at least it used to be when i was as young as the majority)
    But the game sucks, making tracks is way too hard (blabla -- bority)
    Well i guess its subjective but thats at leaat what i think
    And please for the love of god (not the devs anymore that is in question), do not buy any ******* stupid ass freerider coins, badaboom bink!

    Well now that I think of it maybe Im overreacting but Im gonna post this anyway no way ive gone through this hell of typing with my cell phone for nothing.

    Peace!

    ( ---Beace!)
     
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  8. pssst

    pssst Forum Legend Elite Author Team Blob Official Author

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    I didnt read it, but a like for effort
     
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  9. Skeeny

    Skeeny Well-Known Member Official Author

    It's a really deep poem but I just made that then... in like 10 mins

    there are some nights that you just want to fall asleep and forget about everything,
    but you're stuck awake until light, getting no sleep 'till the next night,
    you're stuck alone in an cold, empty room with nothing but voices in your head,
    the pain in your head gets bigger, but goes unnoticed,
    you're trapped in a world which is inevitable in your eyes,
    although you don't realise that the way out of this mess,
    is to just let people in,
    although it's never that simple,
    and you've tried to let people in many times,
    but you just keep getting knocked down,
    getting knocked down so much that you're stuck,
    you don't know what to do anymore,
    you don't know,
    you don't,
    you.

    I just wrote from the heart tbh... (no this isn't happening to me) I guess that's the best way to do it
     
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  10. elephant_breeder

    elephant_breeder Active Member Official Author

    It is good, it has a rhythm to it and it really shows emotion, transfers your feelings, but the end is almost unnecessarily... poetic? like kind of pretentious sounding almost - don't get me wrong I like it but it feels to have no other purpose to sound cool. So yeah that's my opinion.


    E: it was much better than mine
     
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  11. RiderExtreme2

    RiderExtreme2 Well-Known Member Official Author

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    I'm workin on and off on a poem rn. I will post it here once I'm done
     
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  12. CityShep

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    This thread is great
    There isnt no hate
    I love rhymes
    And good memes
    I have no time
    To write

    wtf rhymes with memes
     
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  13. Noob

    Noob Honorary Featured Ghost Mod Ghost Moderator Official Author

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    many things do, like theme dream scheme me he we seem see tree redeem etc. i know some didn't end with M sos tfu the next word can start with M if its so important.
     
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  14. Skeeny

    Skeeny Well-Known Member Official Author

    Haha yeah ill agree there. I had to go to bed (it was 5am) and I had to end it quickly :p
    Thanks tho! :)
     
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  15. FatLard212

    FatLard212 Well-Known Member Official Author

    Let me tell you the story of brave young eli
    Who one midsummer morning thought he would not lie
    So he climber to the top of a hill, and he cry,
    "Today I jump headfirst in pig-sty!"
     
  16. Skeeny

    Skeeny Well-Known Member Official Author

  17. Cynic

    Cynic uh oh Elite Author Official Author

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    Elly
    Nelly
    Big belly
    Cheesecake
    Fat
     
  18. Noob

    Noob Honorary Featured Ghost Mod Ghost Moderator Official Author

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    That escalated quickly.
     
  19. CityShep

    CityShep Gay Furry Memoriam VIP Official Author

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    Aight check me out

    Glasses, jacket, shirt
    Call me glasses, jacket shirt-man.
    Or call me Supa Hot boy, 100 degrees, leather jacket
    'Cause I'm super hot, boy!

    Disclaimer: I'm not a rapper.
     
  20. Elibloodthirst

    Elibloodthirst DeadRising2 VIP Team Helicopter Forum Member Of The Decade (2014-2024) Official Author

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    I'm pretty hard
    but I have a big belly
    come give it a jiggle
    and it'll turn right into jelly


    oooooo

    armator CityShep Skeeny octo
     
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