Campaign 1 - Track 2 Requirements

I'm going to take a crack at this one. I will see what I can come up with.

 

Here is what I got so far.. Any suggestions?

http://pastebin.com/wkEfqdtd

 

That's nice Sono. To me, it would be nice to detail a bit more (grass.. ?) and the landing after the loop is not as smooooooth as I like them

 

I was told to put little detail, but I guess I could throw grass in a bit.. I will mess around with the landing a bit.. I just don't want to make it so smooth that you have to land the loop perfectly every single time.
Knowing you, you probably leaned back during the loop to go faster, right? Well if so, that's why the landing is messy for you. Beginner players will not be leaning back, which will make them go slower, and land smoother.

EDIT: On second thought, I don't think grass will look that good with the current theme.. I will see what everyone else says though..

Thanks for your input, Hash!

 

I tried again. Finally, the landing is good. I might have looked at it too quickly !

 

It's awesome! The only thing I can suggest is to add more scenery to the area surrounding the track and to add a star at the top of the loop, both to teach players about multi-goal tracks and to prevent cheating.

 

Maaaaan, it's not cheating, it's beating high-scores
(And I love tracks where you can find opportunities to distinguish yourself)

 

Sounds goood.

 

Here we go:

http://pastebin.com/0wAcu6MJ

 

Just wanted to make this for fun

http://pastebin.com/SPb1wb4f

 

Ahh I forgot to add the "Earn medals.." text. Shouldn't be too hard to add it in there, though.

Here you go again:
http://pastebin.com/KShcWLe3

 

http://pastebin.com/TbcwgsMU

Here's mine

 

Velksy have you ever cheated on a track?

 

Because you're missing out. It's super fun to 'cheat' play a track the fun/real way!

 

Who me? Not a chance

 

Holy moly.. Just realized that I spelled "Campaign" wrong -.-
Here is the fixed one. I promise this will be the last update xD
http://pastebin.com/YBfksrUS

 

Sorry for the double post, but I understand that the tracks are being reviewed at the moment. I just want to make sure that you guys are reviewing my newest track (in the comment above), as it wasn't updated in the main post at the beginning of this thread.
Velksy Eric
Thanks guys.

 

Published level:
http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/51830-loopy-caves
Sorry for triple post, but I believe Eric asked everyone to post the published level in the right track requirements thread.