There's many great things about this track that I'm going to focus on later, but the main thing i wanted to talk about is how well the density of detail is done. For some reason, when I'm playing your track, i just can't keep myself from zooming in and out, staring at every single little detail that there is. Me, I'm a big scale artist typa person, its very hard for me to represent things at a small scale, but loking at your track has inspired me to do it more, because of how clean the strokes from your background are. I want you guys now, the other people reading this feedback, to go ahead and zoom in on this track, and just start seeing things, and notice how clean and efective his lines are when, for example, he is drawing one of the background trees behind the bridge.
One of the things to improve that i wanted to point out are your clouds. You have a very complex way of doing smoke, and then your clouds are very very simple. This takes a little bit of cohesion away for me, while i know that smoke is more complex than clouds, making your clouds a simpler version of the smoke would be way more effective. For reference, if you want, use any of Netsik's tracks and you'll see what I mean.
I'm gonna be picky and point out a few more tiny things, just you know to do small little adjustments. The rocks on the last cliff are kinda wonky, you go from a semi-flat perspective on the buildings to a complex one, and the perspective lines are off, and that makes them look very wonky. The port bridge is also really boring, and it could be improved by adding tiny small details like just more than straight lines to differentiate the bricks or variety of the concrete. Also, dangerously close spires to the ones nas made.....
Other than this, dude, amazing track, loved it from the start. The ride is really cool too, a bit annoying but its cool. Love the pirate, the different types of trees, the boat and the cannon balls. Also, don't listen to alex, keep doing random titles for your tracks, its so fire whenever i see your titles, that i started to do the same with my 3 feats (bonus points if you let me choose the next one). Incredible start of the year, yes.
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