RESULTS
- Zwinxz: 10
- Zycerak: 9.9
- cod: 9.2
- Silent finger: 8.2
- RedOrBlue: 8.2
- netsik: 7.1
- rayb25: 7
- ICCTD16: 6.9
- labib: 6.4
- Radium: 6.3
- Charlizard: 6
- odezi: 5.7
- TP: 5.5
- Awesomeman: 5.2
- isekb: 5
- Graffe: 4.8
- dante: 4.3
- MegaAlex: 4
- Mudkip: 3.5
- Shrimpers: 3
- Chaosfallen: 3
- Coager: 2e12: 1.5
- Safiyah: 1.5
- yk2: 1
- SlipperyCheese: -1
congratulations to
Zwinxz for first (10)
Zycerak for second (9.9)
Volund for third (9.2)
and CCs
Elis
Odezi: Right so I mean as a track as a whole it's amazing, lil incomplete if you go by itself and I feel like you did rush it, where did that lil monster man go? Like that could have been so cool. I think the thing to take from this is that it's added so much if this was the one track but by itself I feel like it's lacking.
6.4 after deductions.
Zycerak: Dude I mean like the aesthetics in this track is exceptional. I absolutely enjoyed it, the ride, the type feel, the background. This feels like a complete track to me and You did everything you could for me. This would have won any other day if it has as much as zwinxz. 9.9
Zwinxz: Alright dude, this is crazy. 4 times the same thing but changed around. Reminds me a lot like decay but in its own defined way. The chaos inner sections absolutely clean, entirely different and didn't feel reused but you could feel the entire track stemmed off the original. Little callbacks are also cute You went gung ho in this. 10
RadiumRC: Yeah don't think you've rocked any boats, feel like you didnt know what to go for so you went with something you felt comfortable doing, whilst I respect this I don't think it's gonna win you any rewards, try doing something new next round. 6.6
SilentFinger: Dude this is awesome, really impressed with what you got in you and I think you're gonna be a dark horse in this, think you just gotta keep this creativity and you might be earning some extra points. Biggest gripe is that horrible use of the loop, think the best optimisation in this was to remove the assmoon but you kept it and made the most of the poorest part of the track. 8.4
RedOrBlue: Well I wasn't expecting anything half as good as this, you actually managed to surprise me with the consistency of this and with a fun different kind of layered track, theming whilst not the most unique is stemmed entirely different from the OG, very upset about the -1.2 here. 8.4
Rayb25: Liking the theme here but the detail itself is just safe and I think you can use this contest to try something new. I did pick up the theme though 7
mudkip: Yeah can you optimise your time. 4
netsik: there's one thing that'll move this from good to absolutely fantastic. Using your background space accordingly. PLEASE DETAIL THE MOUNTAINS. 7.2
ICCTD: Your track is expanded upon a lot and I feel like you did build this world up. I however do not appreciate the spam line bg. Works in places, doesnt in others. I mean y'know man whatever. I do appreciate that you've made the use of what you got. 6.8
Labib: If I saw just the middle, I'd think you got this. Whilst the tree bit is cool and the middle tower, the rock detail and lack of background beyond the trees really ruin the immersion. Plain jan right here. 6.8
TP: Feel like the biggest draw from this track is your controlled details are a lot better than your animal ones. I think your should expand on this kind of detail more coz it's definitely the highlight of the track. 6
Badger: Honestly gonna random number generate your entry out of 10. Clearly rushed as you lack time, just only cool thing is the auto. 3
G_Raffe: Nice safe entry, actually quite well done if you ask me. I think you can ramp up the progress in further rounds because I believe theres potential there. 5.6
awesomeman: Kinda dont appreciate the trap plastered on this track dude. Need a lil improvements here and there, a little removal of the course of extra lines. 5.4
Chaos_fallen: Is this half done? just looks like you wanted a direction and didnt go there. 3
danteexpress: Yeah I think this a little meh, really wasted potential and moved stuff around 3.6/10
Dr CHILL: Nice safe entry, think everything here is acceptable other than the lighthouse. 5/10
E12: I could have done this entry in like 25 minutes. 2/10
Volund: Gotta be Sunsets yang with moonlight right here. Love the lil comets and stars all across, feels all so wholesome. Really waiting for a feat on this one too. 9.4
YK2: Effort? -1/10
Charlizard: Definitely a discount ROB track with this, unintentionaly so. Definitely fills a bit of the belly for effort. 6
isekb: rides great, little rough out of it with the detail. 5
Slipperycheese: Nah Man this is my favourite. *Eli's choice* -2
Safiyah: Moonlight ride from 2007? 1
Alex: This is a lil cutie. You must be a little new at this but I'm really liking it, your idea is there. If you wanna pm me I'll give you a big little thing on how to do trees as you're clearly striving to improve 4
Shrimpers: Just to piss you off, you go last. This real basic 3
Eryps
odezi - 5 really weird one to judge. the track as a whole is really good, but i’m not judging your practice round remix for round 1. maybe i’m being too harsh here, but what you did for this round is really just a bunch of clouds with some floating platforms, and while i respect what you went for w the ride there’s just way too much recycling. frustrating at times. so it’s not a very good remix, but the track is really good. weird dichotomy
zycerak - 9.9 this is a good track and really really sick, really close to zwinxz’ for me, and really the only one that gives him competition this round. ride is fun and creative, cool theme, and that bird is sick. zwinxz really only beats this because he reinvented the track a few times over, not because his track is that much better
zwinxz - 10 winner in my eyes. really cool and creative reuse of the track, and is just cool in general. if there’s anything i’d say could be better about this, it’d be the ride, but i’m not sure how much of that is you or if it’s problems with the original track. nonetheless, great remix
radiumRC - 6 nice and safe remix. nothing groundbreaking, which is why i’m giving it a 6, but it’s cool to see this from an up and coming author. the lack of changes in the ride is also a bit unfortunate, but all in all nice job.
silentfinger - 8 really cool and well done in a lot of ways. track is really well layered, and the detail is awesome. already have mentioned this to you but that loop is literally the only thing keeping this from being featured. think cynic made an image showing how you could’ve remixed that part of the ride better. great job though
redorblue - 8 this is so clean. you’re known for your ghosting but i wish you made more tracks like this so you could be known as a trackmaker as well. think you could’ve done better than floating platforms with your theme, and it feels kinda empty, but those are pretty minor. could be blown up into a full track if, after teleporting, you changed up the theme of the track a bit, like what zwinxz does on decay or something.
rayb25 - 7 cool, nice and safe. feels like a barren wasteland, which i thinks what you were going for. would like to see more of this out of you
mudkip - 3 nice idea, just unfinished. dont start 2 days before the deadline next time….
netsik - 7 unique idea and style. wish the middle had been filled more since the sections that are filled are awesome. ride is really fun as well, only thing holding it back is the emptiness in the middle and background
icattallthedark16 - 7 i’m amazed you went for something like this. ride is really fun, but suffers from cuts. i hate cuts in ride-based tracks like this because, from a ghosting perspective, once there’s a cut discovered theres no real reason for you to experience the entire track, and as such a lot of the track gets cut out. not sure if that was intentional on your part or not, but would definitely keep that in mind if you make a track like this in the future. also feel like it’s worth mentioning that while your bg detail is just a bunch of spammed texture lines, you made it work well. so nice job
labib - 6 the highlight detail in the center is awesome, but the rest of the track is just staunchly average. if you had done something more in the background, or really anywhere, with that sort of theme this track would be at another level
tp - 5 really respect the idea (it’s a cool one), but the monster (and the track in general?) honestly looks rushed. suffers from the same problems as icttd16’s entry too. that is not me, btw.
coager - 1 you suck
g_raffe - 4 another entry that’s just fine. nothing too special or new, but i like the way you remixed the ride.
awesomeman82 - 5 i have a lot of issues with this track, mainly because there’s a lot of small things that, if fixed, would make this a legitimately good track. why did you put chicken scratch all over the track? why are some of the buildings phasing into the cliffs? why is the sun not a circle? why is that smoke a bunch of scribbles? with all that said it’s not a bad track, and you did a nice job. it’s just so close to being better
chaos-fallen - 3 mainly remixed the ride, and that’s cool. think it’s fun, but it’s not an amazing ride really. also having planks for most of the track but leaving some lines just there is bad. makes it look lazy.
danteexpress - 5 another of the “safe and nothing too special” remixes. your rides are really good, and if you want to make a good track with this kind of detail you’ll have to make it super large. would recommend you look at vapaa’s supreme delight, which is what this track reminds me of
drchill - 4 nice job. the shading is nice and definitely enhances things. nothing too special or unique. main drawback is that you drew a lighthouse but nothing else that implies you’re near the coast. not bad but could be better
e12 - 1 just a bunch of planks and basic things. you can do better
cod - 9 really compact piece, but it feels complete. love the simplicity of everything. feels very much like pinn’s sunset, which i think you said you were going for
yk2 - 2 minimal effort. you just used brush to connect the lines and make it look like a cave. lazy! you can do better
charlizard - 6 definitely your best track. detail’s not great, but the scale of things shows me you can definitely improve on this. keep working to be better
isekeb - 5 not bad not great. pretty average cave if you ask me.
slipperycheese - 0 if yourkidding’s was low effort i dont know what this is
hafisayah - 2 pretty much the original track. nothing new at all
megaalex70 - 4 appreciate the scale and things you went for. you just need to clean your detail style up a bit
shrimpersgate - 3 meh. cool that you went a different direction than the original track, but it’s really nothing special
Thanks again guys and thanks eryp for judging. The featured entries of the round qualify for this rounds bonus prizes.