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Late 2014 WIPS

Discussion in 'Tracks' started by codrey, Dec 2, 2014.

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  1. codrey

    codrey Guest

    Decided to make this thread to only showcase my best WIP's (at the time of creation).
    Feedback, criticism and compliments are greatly appreciated! :)
    Track Status: Stopped for the min
    Days spent on it: 29 days since i started it
    Size (kb): 165 kb
    Photos: 1
    Length of track: 3 seconds
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    Track status: In the works
    Days spent on it: 4 days
    Size (Kb): 92 kb
    Photos: 1
    Length of track: 2 seconds
    upload_2014-12-24_16-49-20.png
    http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/103347-underneath-the-trees-nc The second track has been released! :D
    Edit; only didn't delete all of that crap cos of nostalgia. Don't bump this thread, go to my "V Gallery" for my actual gallery
     
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    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  2. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    This is your best track so far. I'd have to say that the rocks don't look to good. I think you should make them grass. Other than that, it looks really good.
     
    Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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  3. codrey

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    Thanks Jacob! :) Ur right about the rocks FOR SURE, i still want rocks just i'll change what they look like, but idk what i should make them look like.... Any tips/help?
     
    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  4. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Try making the lines much small. Have you seen nasrani tracks? He does REALLY good rock detail. You might just want to try shading. Here one second. I'll quickly make a rock and post a picture.
     
    Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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  5. codrey

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    Thanks! :)
     
    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  6. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Screen Shot 2014-12-02 at 9.55.12 AM.png
    Okay, it looks terrible because I did it way too quickly. Mostly because I need to go somewhere. So I'll spend more time later on a better rock.
     
    Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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  7. codrey

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    Rushed or not, thats still really good! Thanks! :)
     
    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  8. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Yeah, don't go changing your rocks to look like that one. I'll get you a better one.
     
    Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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  9. codrey

    codrey Guest

    OK, thanks! :)
     
    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  10. codrey

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    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  11. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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  12. codrey

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    OK, gimme a sec...
     
    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  13. codrey

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    Here it is!!!
    upload_2014-12-2_19-40-19.png
     
    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  14. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Hmmm. I don't know, it's up to you. Just keep working on everything else. I'll make a better rock.
     
    Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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  15. codrey

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    Cool, idk either, i'll keep trying though!
     
    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  16. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Here, some of my favorite rocks are Honza47's. Here is a picture.
    Screen Shot 2014-12-02 at 10.44.23 AM.png
     
    Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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  17. codrey

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    I'll try, but dont expect anything to look like that!!! :)
     
    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  18. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Just make sure to shade the bottom. Make it dark.
     
    Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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  19. codrey

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    codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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  20. Cryogenic

    Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

    Good, but take a full photo of the whole track. Also, if you want, you can send me the code and I can help.
     
    Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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