less is sometimes more. some parts are way too stuffed with grey lines, like some of your rocks. try to clean it up a bit and it will look even better
nah i swear zwinxz must have sneaked a look at my trackcode somehow how about everyone just add a random chain somewhere in their track so that we won't be accused of copying
trying would be a good start mess around, draw exactly what's in your foreground but in the back with scenery lines. you can do it e; reference pictures and looking at other tracks (without ripping them off) may be helpful too
hey zwinxz , u said some gery lines were like, stuffed: do you mean this? and any suggestions? (background mixed with fore-ground(s) this is my new track coming soon ;D (many in progress)
BenWright78 try to draw your lines with some purpose, think about what the lines represent. for ground detail you want to show changes in ground level and shape, folds, creases, crevices, depth, formation etc i'd advice mixing your black and grey lines for a nice overall look. but if you're going for grey only this time, i've adjusted your WIP to show it's potential if you avoid the random line placement. hope this helps