It looks uniquely fancy and impressive although the gravity powerup on the left key should be faced to the left, not the bottom, of the other keys.
For your track I get the feeling that once you've seen the thumbnail you've seen the whole track. It's a fairly simple concept, what you're doing with the squiggly lines and stuff, like anybody could do it almost. Midnight Parkour is one of those tracks that didn't require much skill but the effort got the feat. I doubt yours will be different. Count on a feat from Max, for sure. Don't get me wrong, it's an awesome track when zoomed out, and it has amazing potential. Maybe change it up a bit? Add something new? Or forget I'm here and don't let my toxic attitude un-motivate you
I did try to change it that's why i made it a collab with superboody and asked him to draw a city which you get to when you go through the last teleport, he did a great job and made a very good 3D city although he couldn't finish it cuz of his studies, and yes i am not un-motivated
i suggest you go for a different approach, let alone different detail in general. that sht is generic lmao im pretty sure i've seen other people do something like that and not get a feat.