Drawing Thread

Discussion in 'Anything and everything Free Rider' started by Maple, Sep 20, 2014.

  1. JCRadical

    JCRadical Active Member Official Author

    Anyone want to critique these trees?
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    I know you may be surprised to see me here, but I just got official author. I didn't know until about 30 minutes ago, enough to throw together these trees
     
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  2. AngryGroudon

    AngryGroudon Well-Known Member Official Author

    CityShep, is this better? Obviously I haven't finished it yet but this is what I've done. How would you suggest I do the canopy?
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  3. Sono

    Sono Well-Known Member Official Author

    From my experience I've learned that it's difficult to detail the bark of a tree just by filling in an outline of said tree. Instead, I would try and give the bark some texture by having the bark define the shape of the tree.
    Take this feedback with a grain of salt, though - I don't have much experience in detailing foliage in FRHD.
     
  4. AngryGroudon

    AngryGroudon Well-Known Member Official Author

    Okay. Thanks.
     
  5. Polygon

    Polygon Forum Legend Official Author

    After not touching this game for over a month and a half, I decided to actually try to follow CityShep's tutorial on making a grassy hill. I started with a really small one because I didn't want to put too much time and effort into something that I'll probably scrap.
    So, um... here it is.
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    I personally think it is a piece of crap, so I could really use some tips, unless I'm being too critical.
     
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  6. CityShep

    CityShep Gay Furry Memoriam VIP Official Author

    dude it looks phenomenal! well done, you really understood the concept of defining the major angles and ridges. I'd say all it needs is to be blended in with the rest, so jusst add grass on the flat areas too.

    So glad you found it helpful, dude!
     
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  7. Polygon

    Polygon Forum Legend Official Author

    Thanks!! Maybe I was being too critical.
     
  8. xwinx

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  9. codrey

    codrey Guest

    That there is definitely your best stuff yet imo. Looks extremely clean and really appealing. Fantastic stuff
     
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  10. lolz666

    lolz666 Well-Known Member VIP Official Author

  11. RiderExtreme2

    RiderExtreme2 Well-Known Member Official Author

    Hype!
     
  12. CityShep

    CityShep Gay Furry Memoriam VIP Official Author

    This can't come Soon™ enough.
     
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  13. mudkip

    mudkip deer irl Elite Author Official Author

    Get out, no bad puns allowed.
     
  14. CityShep

    CityShep Gay Furry Memoriam VIP Official Author

    death is inevitable
     
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  15. Elibloodthirst

    Elibloodthirst DeadRising2 VIP Team Helicopter Forum Member Of The Decade (2014-2024) Official Author

    HOW SOON IS SOON AAA
     
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  16. waagon

    waagon Forum Legend

    When Cheesecake factories close.
     
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  17. Elibloodthirst

    Elibloodthirst DeadRising2 VIP Team Helicopter Forum Member Of The Decade (2014-2024) Official Author

    Haha very funny, try be part of a joke you were actually here for.
     
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  18. Flying_T_Rex

    Flying_T_Rex Forum Legend Team Blob Official Author

    Eli the most savage cyberbully to ever live
     
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  19. CityShep

    CityShep Gay Furry Memoriam VIP Official Author

    When Cheesecake factories close.
     
  20. Cataclysm

    Cataclysm Well-Known Member VIP Official Author

    Looks kind messy, all these specks floating everywhere. Also looks like a lame Maple ripoff, try coming up with your own style.
     
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