Here is a track I uploaded! Any tips on how to improve my detailing? http://frhd.co/t/147215-magic-mountains
? It looks kinda deformed, looks like you used the grid a bit too much, and it looks like the persons head was chopped off and attached off center...
The muscles are not in the right place, it's ears look like it's supposed to be a part of the head, the eyes are placed weird, legs look too straight, head is too big?
Have you tried to actually draw these things instead of sprites because if not then how would a noob like this