I'll critique then. The inside of the 'P' there is really... weird. Probably fix that. The 'M' is less noticable, but maybe make it in grid is all I can say. It also seems that the letters and numbers fit into the style that you're going for. However, I like the grid designs and they look really cool imo, so good start.
Working on a drawing non-stop right now! Should be finished/uploaded by tonight, I'll see though. Might be able to complete it in 5 hours, but here's it about 30% done! (Note: This is just a quick art track, so it's not going to be huge. Size currently is 74k, and the inspiration is from 5 different pictures, as well as my own imagination. Dig around, you'll find some this that look vaguely familiar to it .) I MAINLY POSTED THIS FOR FEEDBACK AND ADVICE, SO PLEASE; ADVICE!
looks pretty sick is the art itself 74K (curious is it's in the same track as the other one) or is it just going to be that as a track