Your first mistake, a rather
big one might add, is that you used a comma instead of a period after "verbs", which makes it a run on sentence. Also you put a comma after "form" when you shouldn't have.
Yet another mistake, one that is
huge and
unacceptable, is that you used a comma instead of a colon after "mistakes". Boy, these commas, huh?
Oh the irony, "
ELEVEN" should be "eleven" as you very helpfully pointed out yourself before making the same mistake. "I'm in California" is in no way a mistake, so I'll count that as your
fiftieth mistake. Possibly your
worst offense is that you inexplicably added a space between "eight and nine" and the colon that came after.
You almost gave me a heart attack when I saw that you used both commas incorrectly in " 'but' should be, 'But,' ". The first one shouldn't exist and the second one should be a period, don't make this particular mistake again or I could very well die. As a repercussion of misusing the second comma, you didn't capitalize the following "your" as you should have. That is a
massive mistake. It pales in comparison, however, to you using a comma unnecessarily for the
thousandth time in "at the start of your sentence, and the lack of a comma".
Your
six thousandth mistake with commas would be the latter of two comma mistakes, both of which shouldn't exist in " 'so'
, should be
, 'so,' ". I underlined them so you can tell which two I am talking about. I apologize if it took a long time to finish this reply as 3r4nd0n had a heart attack and died after seeing you make that mistake twice.
-3r4nd0n (and the coroner)
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