here's my wip so far http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/121855-the-park-previewsort-o-hard plz tell if sucks or if okay or if it could use a lil improvement thamks
Honestly looks like you're going too much for quantity over quality, which is never a good thing. From what I can see, some parts are just riding over a non smooth line for a couple of seconds, which I'm sure won't be too enjoyable. It reminds me of caves 2 by niclauzon. which had the same problem. It was huge, but not fun or good looking. Try to spend some more time on each section. I know it's cool to have a huge track, but if you want it to be big, you have to just spend more time with it, instead of rush it
to be honest, I've given up on making a "good" track. I absolutely suck at drawing irl, I don't know why I thought I could be better in FR. this track is fun to make, and I'm going to continue on. thanks for your advice, you're truly a master at this game, but I'm definitely not and I'm done with trying to do things beyond my capabilities