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but i like saying ass

 

ok idc

 

auto doesn't work anymore working on a new project. not sure what to call it anyone can like tell me what could be better with it or if it needs improvements of any just by looking at it? Thanks

 

Nothing needs fixing to me

 

thanks 4 ur opinion

 

SKATE PARK 1 and SKATE PARK 2

 

Komo101 Haha I used to be like you, but it really doesn't matter. I've learned to let people say what they want to say, don't worry about them as long as you live up to your own standards.

 

that last part is the most inspirational thing I've heard all month

 

I believe in this to a point, but saying ass isn't something worth whining about. If somebody says something like "rape is cool" and fully mean it then yea, I'd be pissed if you didn't say something but just saying ass is just a way to express something. This is a forum not daycare people can say what they want.

 

Here is what I'm working on, advice is appreciated

 

Make it longer thank 20 seconds. And do more defining detail
Also, all of your tracks seem the say, try something new! Branch out, make mistakes, and then build off your mistakes!

 

be more precise with your lines ( I guess thats the best way to say it) Your lines look a little sloppy and just thrown around. I can't really talk because im pretty soppy too but make sure each line either shows shading or definition. Thats all i got doe.

 

It'll probably be about 30 seconds, and I have never tried a detailed track like this before, so this is pretty exciting. I'm still working on making it look more natural. Thanks for the advice

 

send it to me

 

it looks good. i like it. longer would make it better tho.

 

looking pretty good even if it's short have a feeling it'll be a great track

 

it is done, look on the newest page

 

a nice fun 22 second track gave it a thumbs up

 

thanks

 

Beginning of "loss of spirit"