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Discussion in 'Tracks' started by Coffee, Dec 15, 2013.

  1. AfterImage

    AfterImage Well-Known Member Team Balloon Official Author

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    Practicing from reference is best. Don’t do math in your head. I’ve gotten pretty good at fonts if you need help, just dm me
     
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  2. moinotchubb

    moinotchubb Well-Known Member Team Blob Official Author

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    upload_2023-2-12_6-50-13.png Left it running over night, lol
     
  3. moinotchubb

    moinotchubb Well-Known Member Team Blob Official Author

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    Made a few more images for my big track called 'Mother Nature'. Feel free to give me advice or ideas for more frames. No idea when this is going to come out, I've been working on it on and off for a while now.
    upload_2023-2-12_6-56-27.png
     
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  4. MyrraWolf

    MyrraWolf Well-Known Member Official Author

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    do these look like mountains or just a bunch of grey scribbles on top of some triangles. cant tell : Screen Shot 2023-02-12 at 4.13.26 PM.png
     
  5. Bellboys

    Bellboys Well-Known Member Team Blob

    Those are incredible mountains
     
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  6. AfterImage

    AfterImage Well-Known Member Team Balloon Official Author

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    they look like mountains bruh. v good ones. maybe add some more gray to some of the white spots though, to make them less harsm. Id also say that the foreground mountains blend into the background ones, maybe try adding a layer of white inbetween them. Good stuff, can't wait to see what you are gonna make.
     
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  7. Rvfirerool

    Rvfirerool Active Member Official Author

    Which one should I go with :
    1]
    upload_2023-2-14_16-18-33.png

    or
    2] upload_2023-2-14_16-17-45.png
     
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  8. moinotchubb

    moinotchubb Well-Known Member Team Blob Official Author

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  9. TPlacella

    TPlacella Super Moderator on the FRHD speedrun.com page Team Helicopter Official Author

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  10. Elibloodthirst

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  11. Rvfirerool

    Rvfirerool Active Member Official Author

    Last edited: Feb 14, 2023
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  12. Bellboys

    Bellboys Well-Known Member Team Blob

    I’m loving number one
     
  13. THEend

    THEend feared and/or loathed in seven states Elite Author Team Blob Official Author

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  14. Lagoon

    Lagoon Casual Member

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  15. Rvfirerool

    Rvfirerool Active Member Official Author

    Thx for ur reply guys.. I'm goin with no 2..
    with ur reply it becomes
    4 votes = method 1
    n
    2 votes = method 2.
    So i'll be going with Method 1
     
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  16. Innominate

    Innominate Well-Known Member Official Author

    do v1 cleaner. Make the lines more intentional and less random. Im honestly lovin it. What style clouds you gon do out of those shown?
     
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  17. Rvfirerool

    Rvfirerool Active Member Official Author

    what abt this..
    upload_2023-2-14_20-58-37.png

    Talking abt clouds, I saw some track yesterday looked good so took some inspiration.
     
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  18. Elibloodthirst

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    this
     
  19. Bellboys

    Bellboys Well-Known Member Team Blob

    Agreed. This is fantastic
     
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  20. Innominate

    Innominate Well-Known Member Official Author

    fade slower. Maybe shade the clouds. I like it!

    maybe follow this: https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/870797-dreamt-of-gonzalo
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    this is from that track. It reminded me a lot of what you're doing. I do think that your clouds could be a lot bigger! I'm noticing that not all your clouds are very similar in style, maybe find the one that you like most and stick to that. I would recommend using a reference for realistic clouds, and maybe even make your clouds a lot bigger! I love the moon you have, but I also wish I could see more on it. I'd love if it was bigger and maybe even had some black detail in there.

    that being said it looks really good, can't wait to see what you make :)
     
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