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Discussion in 'Tracks' started by Coffee, Dec 15, 2013.

  1. MyrraWolf

    MyrraWolf Well-Known Member Official Author

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    that would be cool. If I were to add anything to frhd it would be a type of line, like the black one or the grey one, but but one which wouldnt be visible when a track was published but which would be visible in the editor. Because sometimes I will want to sketch something but not in grey because im already making detail in grey, yfm?
     
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  2. spruce

    spruce Dumptruck VIP Official Author

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    You mean a Look Up Table.
     
  3. dzemas

    dzemas Well-Known Member Official Author

    bike headstand
     

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  4. Drndemi

    Drndemi Well-Known Member VIP Official Author

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    te.JPG

    Boy it's gonna take a long time
     
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  5. Elibloodthirst

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    make sure that shits cleaner than a babys bottom yo
     
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  6. spruce

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    but that's his style!!!!!
     
  7. pssst

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  8. dzemas

    dzemas Well-Known Member Official Author

    coming soon................ hopefully it does not spoil
     

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  9. Wayward

    Wayward Well-Known Member Team Balloon Official Author

    Border line fear worthy. Honestly tidy it up and you’re the next 1st feature
     
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  10. Drndemi

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    Yep, definitly gonna take some time on this one
     
  11. dzemas

    dzemas Well-Known Member Official Author

    so what are your recommendations
     
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  12. THEend

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    just draw more stuff! not the same stuff, but different things every time! there's quite a bit of ways you can come at that problem from a logical standpoint, like what kind of materials everything is made up of, what kind of wood, what kind of trees, what kind of dogs, grass, picnic baskets, statues. everyone makes everything differently, and to start drawing them i absolutely understand trying to draw them all the same way when making another, but i feel that's the real difference. the difference between craftsmanship and artisanal work, i suppose?

    this is coming from a sub, btw. for being 14 your stuff is improving on a massively quick scale, i love it. just keep being you, figure out how to be MORE you and the rest will follow
     
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  13. Wayward

    Wayward Well-Known Member Team Balloon Official Author

    Being completely blunt and honest this is what I’d change. Your sky is very empty, and adding only a couple clouds would fill the space so well, but if you want to keep the dense track vibe, adding more storm esc clouds will ups also look good. Good examples of this would be @Maple’s Wrath track or @Fluffysmack’s revelation track. Your trees are disproportional in that the trunks are a lot thicker than the leaf tops, so making those thinner and more shaded would make the track that much better. If you want my help on anything else, feel free to pm me but if you want help from a more qualified person, I’m sure a lot of people would be willing to help if you just asked.

    What endy said it perfect too. It’s all about practice, and if you don’t get the feature that ok! With you it’s not an if but a when you get your first feature. Just have fun with it and when you feel it’s good then post.
     
  14. dzemas

    dzemas Well-Known Member Official Author

    l was planning not to do clouds and instead make hills with bushes. OK l will work on the trees and reference others i'm planing to do a more man made structure for round two. ill pm u for feedback, you seem like a pretty legit guy.
     
  15. dzemas

    dzemas Well-Known Member Official Author

    okay, either way drawing the same thing is boring so yep ill keep that in mind. thanks ill pm u for feedback on round two. i'm thinking of doing a man-made structure of some sorts for round two.
     
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  16. OdysseusSupreme

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    Screenshot 2023-02-10 211541.png
    Its getting bigger ...
     
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  17. Coated_Badger

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  18. MyrraWolf

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    Screen Shot 2023-02-12 at 1.24.26 AM.png dawg drawing letters on freerider gotta be the most difficult thing to do ever in the history of everything
    this took like 6 hours to draw ;_;
     
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  19. Innominate

    Innominate Well-Known Member Official Author

    do it in gray first, then black, then delete the gray

    also use guidelines. Grid also might help you for these blocky-type letters.
     
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  20. MyrraWolf

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    ya i had some grids but i erased them, now im just trying to do the math in my head and doing the best i can. It wont be perfect but its alright
     
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