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Discussion in 'Tracks' started by Coffee, Dec 15, 2013.

  1. AfterImage

    AfterImage Well-Known Member Team Balloon Official Author

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    Um that is a rough draft w/ brush, and here is the reference: [​IMG]
     
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  2. zachypacso

    zachypacso Well-Known Member Team Blob Official Author

  3. robbieraysfan

    robbieraysfan Well-Known Member Official Author

    the eraser
     
  4. AfterImage

    AfterImage Well-Known Member Team Balloon Official Author

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    slowly but surely working on my moai (s) Screen Shot 2021-11-18 at 7.54.34 PM.png
     
  5. RidingForever

    RidingForever Well-Known Member Official Author

    he got the shaaaadesss
     
  6. track3r

    track3r Member Official Author

    this track is gonna be so huge, imma work on it all day and make it sooo huge, its gonna be one of the biggest tracks
     

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  7. track3r

    track3r Member Official Author

    does anyone want the file to check out the track so far and tell me if yall like it or not? its gonna be a long process depending on how large i want it. and i will publish previews, maybe.
     
  8. RidingForever

    RidingForever Well-Known Member Official Author

    Imo, I'd say no grid but it's great!

    Very nice dude!
     
  9. track3r

    track3r Member Official Author

    i use the 10 gride and make everything 2x2 and it works fine for me
     
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  10. robbieraysfan

    robbieraysfan Well-Known Member Official Author

    upload_2021-11-20_20-37-54.png
    _____________^^^
    ___this part is like halfway done

    anyone here that will actually critique this
     
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  11. Blank_Guy

    Blank_Guy Forum Legend Team Balloon Official Author

    sure
     
  12. waddleshoes

    waddleshoes Well-Known Member Team Truck Official Author

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    upload_2021-11-22_20-9-53.png HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE
     
  13. Fluoride

    Fluoride Well-Known Member Official Author

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  14. Helix

    Helix Active Member Official Author

    Hoping I could get some feedback on my current project, working on it again after 4 years and I've been blending new detail with the old. Additionally I did a rough sketch of a layout for the ending view. I would appreciate feedback on the stly and if you notice any peculiarities about the layout I came up with except the random tree lol. styleblend.PNG ending layout.PNG
     
  15. PrimeMinister

    PrimeMinister Well-Known Member Official Author

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  16. biirch

    biirch Well-Known Member Official Author

    upload_2021-11-23_6-48-18.png

    e; this is a collab between me and ShamatoZ might come out by the end of the month or beginning of December
     
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  17. PinBaller05

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  18. PrimeMinister

    PrimeMinister Well-Known Member Official Author

    Big one so far.
     

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  19. zachypacso

    zachypacso Well-Known Member Team Blob Official Author

    the grass near the part where the slanted hill ends looks a little short and uniform for growing in the wild. Also, the web page blocks off half of the screenshot so I can't even see the right side of either picture up close. The grass would certainly be more interesting if you added more cattail things throughout, or maybe some flowers like this: flowers.png flowers2.png
    But in your own style.
    or maybe some small bush-like things: bushes.png
    Another thing that could help is if you added the illusion of the wind, so like small particles being blown around and all the plants in an area were bent a specific direction. Trees in different stages also give extra life to an area. For instance, saplings could help with the thought of spring, big trees with lots of leaves, like cottonwoods, would go along with summer, trees with only a few leaves and leaves laying on the ground for fall, and barren trees for winter, though from the screenshots that doesn't look like what you're going for. I noticed that you have a pine forest in the left corner. What you're doing looks good so far; the only thing I have to say is don't make the boughs too close. Then the tree looks weird. Let the downward curves flow in a way that looks natural, while it may not feel that way. I always fill
    in my pine trees: but you can do whatever you like.
    pinetreetop.png
     
  20. Helix

    Helix Active Member Official Author

    This is fantastic, thanks so much!
     
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