https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/762730-the-edge-of-reality OdysseusSupreme (Odezi)
CC: You're an absolute nutter to even fathom the idea of this track. Personally speaking I'd have said you've shot too high but considering I'd say it's had a good outcome. It's a little empty in spaces, there's a lot of unused space for ride and it's a little unclean but conisdering the time constraint I'd forgive you for it. The world building, the creativity to reuse the ride and the risizing of the elements really come out strong and on top of that it still holds up very well.
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/761443-ancient-basin Exylies
CC: looks relatively cool, clean but not that creative. Ride hasn't detracted much and I don't particularly blame you. Your issue is the same with the OdysseusSupreme with connectivity and a big problem with background, ruins world building and I think it'd have put more to it. Tip for next round is to try change the themeing to something unique and to have both foreground and background.
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/760811-rc-practice-round 45ones
CC: Yeah your effort put in was perfectly framed by your description. To get a good result you need to break a few eggs, practice or not. It had potential to seem decent.
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/762655-demon Apocolypse
CC: Lovely use of changing the themes, definitely unfinished though. Think the creativity with the housing was a lovely touch. Think potentially have a chance to break the ice if you put yourself forward and work with your creativity. Continue thinking out the box without making those weird boxes thing
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/761518-tendrils-ii Coager
CC: Lol well your rocks and tendrills look no different, idk if that's mean to be a thing or not cuh. Best part of the track is that sun, looks mega clean which kinda detracts from your basic sketchy look. My challenge for you is to try and step your detailing game up even though I know you're going away.
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/762169-cave-mine MegaAlex
CC: So this is a very basic rendition, it's not bad per se but doesn't rock any boats. I think whilst you didn't do anything bad and played it safe I feel you've created yourself to be a relatively lack lustre creator. Your challenge is to try and explore themes.
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/762141-rc9pr Hafisyah
CC: Even more basic than the last, feels like babys first detail. Much so of the old 2008 and maybe very early 2009. Very excited to see you also try and explore themes.
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/761133-altitude Radium
CC: I see what you did there! Very clever indeed, whilst the detail is very basic (other than the clouds tbf they're good) I though you did this very effectively. I must say buddy you've made a very good remix with the skills you've got. I think you can use this to step up your detailing whilst still maintaining your creativity.
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/761016-rcixpr sltg28
CC: This had potential, the reverse of a sunken town, a bustling city. Shame you didn't bother completing the track.
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/760818-rc9pr/ isekeb
CC: Another very clever remixing rendition the trial was fun, had to watch a ghost coz I suck. Jw why didnt you utilise more of the area? Anyway looking forward to future tracks..
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/762700-heli kazman
CC: It's a helicopter.
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/760875-rc9pr Confuzion
CC: Uh I am confused. Houses are very well shaped, trees look like lil lambies. Clouds are good. Try for some ground detail on top of this.
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tell me if I've missed anyone.
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