Post Your WIP Screenshot Here

I have not been on in a while but I made a house really quickly for the track that I have posted pictures of several times here. Figured rationalities what do you think? (With your permission) I have been using your styles of house building on this track.

 

maybe try not to use the grid as much. the windows looks too "blocky" and perfect. feel free to look at my most recent track and take some ideas from them. other than that, looks good man

 

I agree with rationalities, the more imperfect it is the more realistic and lived in it feels

 

Try adding some broken bricks or missing ones, a little detail goes a long way

 

SilentFinger rationalities thx so much, but the feeling that I am going for is clean, new, bright houses, with a hint of spring in the background. (if I can ever draw a good-looking tree) Any help would be much appreciated, I will take no offense if no one wants to help.

 

i mean id just check some tracks out and find the trees you like. then try and manipulate them into your own style.

 

rationalities thank you! I looked up how to draw easy trees, and I will be re-doing all the trees in my WIP track. Also, if you want me to see the message you sent me cn u pls mention me so I get an alert? Otherwise I just have to come back every 15 minutes or so and check on the thread.

 

Okay rationalities I finally chose tree style to pursue, one that matches the incredibly messy evergreens of the track.
The first tree took maybe 3 minutes, the middle tree took about 5, and the tree to the far right took at least 10 minutes to do. All in all about 20 minutes went into making this, so I hope I can get some feedback.

 

i mean they would make sense if your track was like in a dark setting. but going all black looks weird. i suggest you look at some others maybe. zgolex, mudkip, and other popular authors. or even my recent tracks have decent trees. idk, i just like the trees to have life to them, and just flow around.

 

rationalities thx for the feedback. I want to go through the process slowly because I am new to serious detail. I am looking up how to do a lot of stuff and then taking inspiration from that, so I don't have THAT much of a personal style. Working on it though!

 

zachypacso if you do likke a ride through a silhouetted track, use those trees.

 

Polarized Thank you

 

ur getting better at drawing tracks btw.

 

I make trails and I'm too noob to beat them :V
Track: Lithium
Progress: TBD

 

Cool eruption! huge track I suppose?

 

reasonable

 

you named your track after an old person disease

 

Dang I wish I had an artistic touch

 

i mean its not uploaded yet

 

maybe you should name it "The End", seems like a good fit for it : D