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    • Late 2014 WIPS

    Discussion in 'Tracks' started by codrey, Dec 2, 2014.

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    1. codrey

      codrey Guest

      Decided to make this thread to only showcase my best WIP's (at the time of creation).
      Feedback, criticism and compliments are greatly appreciated! :)
      Track Status: Stopped for the min
      Days spent on it: 29 days since i started it
      Size (kb): 165 kb
      Photos: 1
      Length of track: 3 seconds
      track wip.PNG
      Track status: In the works
      Days spent on it: 4 days
      Size (Kb): 92 kb
      Photos: 1
      Length of track: 2 seconds
      upload_2014-12-24_16-49-20.png
      http://www.freeriderhd.com/t/103347-underneath-the-trees-nc The second track has been released! :D
      Edit; only didn't delete all of that crap cos of nostalgia. Don't bump this thread, go to my "V Gallery" for my actual gallery
       
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      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    2. Cryogenic

      Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

      This is your best track so far. I'd have to say that the rocks don't look to good. I think you should make them grass. Other than that, it looks really good.
       
      Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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    3. codrey

      codrey Guest

      Thanks Jacob! :) Ur right about the rocks FOR SURE, i still want rocks just i'll change what they look like, but idk what i should make them look like.... Any tips/help?
       
      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    4. Cryogenic

      Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

      Try making the lines much small. Have you seen nasrani tracks? He does REALLY good rock detail. You might just want to try shading. Here one second. I'll quickly make a rock and post a picture.
       
      Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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    5. codrey

      codrey Guest

      Thanks! :)
       
      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    6. Cryogenic

      Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

      Screen Shot 2014-12-02 at 9.55.12 AM.png
      Okay, it looks terrible because I did it way too quickly. Mostly because I need to go somewhere. So I'll spend more time later on a better rock.
       
      Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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    7. codrey

      codrey Guest

      Rushed or not, thats still really good! Thanks! :)
       
      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    8. Cryogenic

      Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

      Yeah, don't go changing your rocks to look like that one. I'll get you a better one.
       
      Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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    9. codrey

      codrey Guest

      OK, thanks! :)
       
      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    10. codrey

      codrey Guest

      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    11. Cryogenic

      Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

      Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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    12. codrey

      codrey Guest

      OK, gimme a sec...
       
      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    13. codrey

      codrey Guest

      Here it is!!!
      upload_2014-12-2_19-40-19.png
       
      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    14. Cryogenic

      Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

      Hmmm. I don't know, it's up to you. Just keep working on everything else. I'll make a better rock.
       
      Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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    15. codrey

      codrey Guest

      Cool, idk either, i'll keep trying though!
       
      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    16. Cryogenic

      Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

      Here, some of my favorite rocks are Honza47's. Here is a picture.
      Screen Shot 2014-12-02 at 10.44.23 AM.png
       
      Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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    17. codrey

      codrey Guest

      I'll try, but dont expect anything to look like that!!! :)
       
      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    18. Cryogenic

      Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

      Just make sure to shade the bottom. Make it dark.
       
      Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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    19. codrey

      codrey Guest

      codrey, Dec 2, 2014
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    20. Cryogenic

      Cryogenic Well-Known Member Official Author

      Good, but take a full photo of the whole track. Also, if you want, you can send me the code and I can help.
       
      Cryogenic, Dec 2, 2014
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