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Discussion in 'Tracks' started by Coffee, Dec 15, 2013.

  1. Frogman3000

    Frogman3000 Casual Member Official Author

    looks better zoomed out to 100%
     

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  2. TuttiFruity

    TuttiFruity Well-Known Member Official Author

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    this is a fairly easy way to do them and they look nice, but thats just my personal preference
     

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  3. Netsik

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    yeah i wish i could do leaves like that, those are nice. mine look like this-
    Screen Shot 2019-01-10 at 11.05.48 PM.png
     
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  4. OdysseusSupreme

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    i just cant do it not with lines
     
  5. TuttiFruity

    TuttiFruity Well-Known Member Official Author

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    I think the opposite lol, I like your leaves alot more. They have a cartoon feel about them
     
  6. Ishu

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    i think i wrote up a tutorial for mr..A a while back either in this thread or the Detailing Thread, so go find that if u want idk

    The basics of good leaves is drawing a good outline, whether u choose to draw each individual leaf or not. My biggest pet peeve about leaves which bugs me in a lot of tracks is the failure to recognize the structure of a tree. Its super basic stuff that i feel gets undervalued heavily. Things like:
    Trees grow upwards towards the sun
    The base of a tree trunk gets thinner as it extends upwards; same for branches; and each sub branch
    Leaves grow at the tip of branches, NOT on the sides

    With that in mind i find it easiest to draw a leafless tree first, and then add leaves where your outline allows. When u draw leaves, draw way more than u think is necessary, u should have more space dedicated to leaves than bark
    ur leaves are in the right place, but u wanna add much much more leaves and clean up the lines. They are a bit messy
    Theres no sense of the individual leaves and the outline doesnt look natural. Id suggest drawing smaller sections of leaves at a time rather than drawing an outline and line spamming to fill the space
    generally very clean, however sub brach is somehow thicker than the branch it stems from. The shading/ bark indents seem a bit random also. with a tree as small as this one, its best to make the bark streamlined rather than rough and jagged

    e; lmk if this is helpful
     
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  7. TuttiFruity

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    Ishu
    Thanks for the tips, I was connecting all of the lines and readjusting them so they looked cleaner. Is that what you mean by cleaning up the lines?
     
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  8. Ishu

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    yep
     
  9. i clearly need help with the leaves xD
    noleafsosad.JPG ah.JPG otherwise i'll keep drawing dead trees. actually lets just say they are deciduous : )
     
  10. TuttiFruity

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    make the trunk alot thinner, unless you are drawing a tree of great height
     
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  11. Fluffysmack

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    chill out this is absolutely pointless argument. its not only me who tells people this, go back to the first few pages. you'll see how much other people say the same stuff that I did.
     
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  12. Fluffysmack

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    upload_2019-1-11_7-56-31.png any suggestions on the little tree in the middle?
     
  13. Madara

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    Stop acting like a fool kid.
    Say what you wanna say once not repeatedly in different comments.
    And it does matter that you and some other fool are arguing on this thread because you are SPAMMING ALL OF OUR ALERTS!
    Nearly everyone have commented on this thread, so whatever you post we ALL get an alert.
    So fudge off and don't spam please.
    Thanks.
     
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  14. only allowed to spam if it's good drawings : 0
     
  15. Rayb25

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    yeet
     
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  16. here's a lion
     

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  17. Netsik

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    looking great, i don't see anything wrong with the tree. I love the leaves on it.

    make the brush tool size smaller for leaves- and make a lot of leaves. Remember, leaves are no just at the tips of the branches.
     
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  18. Ishu

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    add more leaves on the front face of the tree, otherwise i think ur good

    in the future u should experiment with larger trees; they give u more space to play around with and be more precise about
     
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  19. TuttiFruity

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    thats looking pretty nifty
     
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  20. i dont use brush
     

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