My first track :)

Here is my first track i don't know if it's good

https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/317934-lines-my-first-track/

 

No offense but it's sloppy. Use the grid bro. Spend more time on it. Get inspired.

 

its pretty good, everyone has to start somewhere

 

yeah that's true, sorry NikolaiVasilev. But u pretty much said to tell u if it's good or not.

 

Cool Could you list the wrong things I did so I keep them in mind if i'm going to make another track just to know

I don't like the things near the "Careful" and "UP" sign and i also do know that it's just lines but i'm bad at painting

 

Here is the second track:
https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/319204-round-and-around-we-go

Is it better?

 

much better, +1, maybe more checkpoints tho

 

I was wondering if there is a way to edit track once it's been created ?

 

no, i'm afraid not. You can always re-upload though.

 

and maybe i cannot delete ... so perfect or nothing

 

I made a third one but i don't think it's as good as the second Here it is https://www.freeriderhd.com/t/320814-easy-sunday

 

Work on the first jump

 

one more track... http://frhd.co/t/327214-big-jumps-retry-read-descr/r/nikolaivasilev but it's hard

 

A bit sloppy I'm gonna try your others

 

since when are you authority on track sloppiness

 

Excuse me but others said it to so I followed

 

tsk tsk idk if you'll make it here on freerider, we only accept leaders, not followers. im afraid im going to have ask you to come up with your own opinion if you ever want to have a chance of not being a social outcast :/

 

Are you lol

 

yes
evidence:

 

Ok u are the authority on sloppyness