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Discussion in 'Tracks' started by Coffee, Dec 15, 2013.

  1. Ishu

    Ishu Well-Known Member Official Author

    the problem with ur tracks is that the detail sucks. it seems like you rush drawing trees nshit just for the hell of making a giant track. I’d rather you be more precise and create a track with a decent ride and memorable detail than a giant track that looks the same as every other track you make and looks the same front to end.
     
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  2. EthanLin80

    EthanLin80 Well-Known Member Official Author

    that's a bit harsh
     
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  3. spruce

    spruce Well-Known Member Official Author

    nice, i think the tree would look better without that very top area of leaves.
     
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  4. Eryp

    Eryp Well-Known Member Official Author

    don't get me wrong man, i love your tracks and detail, but a lot of what you've made has been very repetitive when considering the ride and detail. again, not that there's anything wrong with that, but i'd love to see you try something new that you haven't done before
    e; ishu beat me to it ;(
     
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  5. Phase

    Phase Well-Known Member Official Author

    I think you know by now all your tracks seem repetitive, I’m not sure if that’s just because they’ve been in the Nassau Series, but I really think you should start shading your tracks more than just spamming outlines. All I’ve really seen from you are a lot of rocks, clouds, grass, and trees. I really think you should start adding some exotic objects to your tracks to make them seem less repetitive. I also think you need to pay more attention to the track on a smaller scale, and making it seem less than a bunch of spammed bushes. I don’t know if this is just me, but I think you should add more depth to your track, maybe make a larger middleground. It’s up to you if you just want to get a ton of features, or if you want to be the best you can be.
     
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  6. Calculus

    Calculus Well-Known Member Official Author

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  7. Zgolex

    Zgolex Well-Known Member Official Author

    fair enough... just dont know how to plan a completely different track to all my other ones. And yeah the detail is usually rushed because I want to get it over and done with. Btw that tree was rushed again just for the purpose of showing you lot what I have in mind. I just cant figure out how to structure out my track to make it unique than the other ones. I've tried on the editor but it just looks sh!t each time, so I stick with the "repetitive" scheme I currently use
     
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  8. mR..A

    mR..A Well-Known Member Official Author Featured Tracks Moderator

    simple, just think of a new theme to work with. you obviously like forest tracks which is fine, you've perfected that one. from there an easy step forward would be a jungle theme, you can still do trees, grass and clouds etc. but you could try some different types of trees, add some exotic plants, animals and even rain. the smaller details will help make your tracks look more impressive overall and stand out from the rest.

    it's easy to get stuck in a loop after doing the same type of detail for a while, but it's not difficult to break away from that. from the jungle theme you could move onto waterfalls and cliffs, from there you could try a volcano theme with the rider dodging lava, from there you could adjust the volcano detail to work on a space themed track with craters and asteroids. if you master that then an underwater track would work nicely and you could try some sea creatures or a shipwreck, the possibilities are endless.

    and once you have experience with different themes and the skill set to draw a variety of interesting things, you can just let your imagination do the work on the editor and that's when we see truly original and memorable tracks
     
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  9. Zgolex

    Zgolex Well-Known Member Official Author

    yeah that's what im trying to do. I've got the hang of the forest themed tracks but things like different types of trees seems really difficult because I cant think of any "different" type of tree. Of course I could just use the internet for ideas but when it comes to drawing them it isnt how I'd want it to be like. exotic plants sound real nice, but I can't think of any either hence why it does look repetitive
     
  10. Ishu

    Ishu Well-Known Member Official Author

    You could try a track layout that goes upwards instead of horizontal. In terms of detail, the best progression for where ur at rn is to just draw more realistically.

    Also, the repitition part pisses me off only because you continue to replicate pinn’s early work. Even if its not on purpose, you’ve continued to use that style over and over. Even pinn had moved on. So to me, it seems that you mindlessly copy a style that has worked for another artist with no goal of improving ur own talent.
     
  11. Zgolex

    Zgolex Well-Known Member Official Author

    nah i don't think im copying pinn tbh, otherwise others would've mentioned it. Im trying to actually develop my own style
     
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  12. kv99gun

    kv99gun Well-Known Member

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  13. Corius

    Corius Member

    Crimson coming
     

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  14. Ishu

    Ishu Well-Known Member Official Author

    they just dont wanna address the elephant in the room or dont care enough




    everyone fuckin knows you replicate pinn





    I’d bash you harder if this you copying meant something
     
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  15. Zgolex

    Zgolex Well-Known Member Official Author

    lmao relax man thats what you think Im doing, but Im not
     
  16. Examples

    Examples Well-Known Member Official Author

    Anyone down to do a collab, its been a while
     
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  17. Corius

    Corius Member

    @e
    I would
     
  18. Examples

    Examples Well-Known Member Official Author

    ight bet start a track
     
  19. Corius

    Corius Member

    Ok I started one
     
  20. Calculus

    Calculus Well-Known Member Official Author

    100 sub special... as soon as i reach it, lol, ill keep adding on till i reach 100 subscribers, stay tuned ;)
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